The Veil
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All are wondering
what's hiding
behind the veil? i
What's that
which vision
can't steal? i
iTo be "covered"
how does it feel? i
How can she
with others deal? i
Is her decision
real?
The Veil
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All are wondering
what's hiding
behind the veil? i
What's that
which vision
can't steal? i
iTo be "covered"
how does it feel? i
How can she
with others deal? i
Is her decision
real?
I liked this poem, but I suggest that you continue it and maybe give the other view point or the answer to these questions.
I know it may look incomplete
but I was limited by the rhyme
I had the meaning in mind
but couldn't shape it into additional lines of poetry
