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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : The Veil



ethylene
03-01-2008, 11:14 AM
The Veil
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All are wondering
what's hiding
behind the veil? i

What's that
which vision
can't steal? i
iTo be "covered"
how does it feel? i
How can she
with others deal? i

Is her decision
real?

aouniat
04-01-2008, 12:21 AM
I liked this poem, but I suggest that you continue it and maybe give the other view point or the answer to these questions.

ethylene
04-01-2008, 01:30 AM
I know it may look incomplete

but I was limited by the rhyme

I had the meaning in mind
but couldn't shape it into additional lines of poetry